This is incredible writing, with hooks and volleys and swerves in every paragraph, and almost every sentence, although you keep us from being seasick, masterfully, by letting the piece's multiple refrains sew themselves through the twists and the surprising turns.
This is incredible writing, with hooks and volleys and swerves in every paragraph, and almost every sentence, although you keep us from being seasick, masterfully, by letting the piece's multiple refrains sew themselves through the twists and the surprising turns.
Oh, Joseph, thank you for saying so and calming my anxieties. Sometimes I worry these swervy ones lose their way.
"It was a good field, then. You could pat its back and say, Good field." 🖤
So many beautiful moments here, like this one, made me feel as though I am looking through a kaleidoscope.
Really appreciate your sharing of that evocation. Thank you for reading, Olga.